Pitch Presentation Video

 

REFLECTION:

I felt like this presentation was pretty good. At first, I didn't think it would be that good. Because we only did it for a fairly short time and the presentation looked pretty sketchy, but based on the feedback. During the time of Mr. VZ and our classmates, I found my presentation to be quite good and also quite well prepared. The things that my group needed to edit were the things that we needed to add to the presentation. The slide that makes it more beautiful is the content that can help the audience understand more so that just sketchy pictures will not help them understand the entire content we want to share.

The next problem we want to talk about is that our presentation is quite sketchy and that leads to the fact that reading like will be quite difficult for the audience to understand, along with the fact that Peter's lyrics are not yet completed, it will not be able to explain the overall content of that lyric to the entire audience watching. For our team, Mark and Nathan did a very good job in presenting my capital. I also have a bad habit of washing my clothes a lot, but I also tried my best to complete my presentation with my two teammates. I hope Peter can release the lyrics before October so that we can start completing the entire content of our song. In general, our team has improved a lot from last year to this year, I also want to improve.

As for the feedback that my heart received from a friend that is the lack of lyrics, we will start focusing on creating a complete lyric within the next month as soon as possible from the teacher's comment that the location we chose is very good and also very beautiful because we agree on one thing and the teacher also added that it is also quite lacking in scenes, we will start focusing on collecting the scenes that can be considered the most beautiful to put into the music video and most suitable for each stage of each melody in that music video.

Anyway, get rid of my bad habits and improve on grammar and content preparation issues. So I also want to encourage my news to be able to complete the deadline and finish the lyric before October to prepare for the most perfect content.